Wednesday, October 20, 2010

So Many People 2.0

Stern didn't like the word "emotion" (and neither did I) so Charles helped me rewrite this one...I like this a lot better than the original.

Feeling like I fit in
until I try to stand out
I am so many people
and I'm only ever one
or two
at a time
which is fine
for a while
until i get restless
and those other mes
are aching to escape
so they rattle and roll
and swell and grow
until the pressure builds
and breaks the walls
that trapped inside
the things I didn't realize
I was trying to hide
until it was too late
and everything is
overwhelmed
with
shit

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