So Stern absolutely hated this poem. I'm not a huge fan either, I think it's very cliched, but I think I could salvage it with a little work... Let me know what you think.
I collect sunsets
and snowy days
pretty eyes
and sparkley waves
I collect beauty
I collect grace
I collect the sun
as it lights up your face
I collect rain storms
that shatter the night
white picket fences
and you, holding me tight
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